Rough Cut

  Looking at the rough cut of our thriller there are a few things i would like to change. .

The soundtrack at the beginning seems to be missing, i would like to put it from the start so the tone and mood is established right at the beginning, and so it continues thought the opening sequence.  

A fade transition into Damien's thoughts would be more recognisable as a flashback, and if we changed the scenes to black and white, or faded colour it could get the message across to the audience more easily that this is a memory/

A change of sound within' the flashbacks could also make it more clear in if it's good, or bad. For example during Iga we would have singing birds, and Ms River whispers.

Not all of the titles came through during rendering, and my name seemed to have been left out during editing.

Like "Layer Cake" Megan suggested that we put the music earlier than the clip starts so we're already in the mood before the opening sequence starts.

This being said, the rough cut went well and i am particularly pleased with the jump cuts at the end of the opening, and the disjointed editing at the begining of the thriller and it really sets the enigmatic mood.